Endless


This endless approach
The gutter of my necessary throat
Finally striking
Gently drawing near
Nearer
Failing
falling
failing
Silent waters
Your elusive heat
And that final extreme




Poetry by efflux
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Written on 2006-11-18 at 20:11

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
I think this is better for that edit you made! Thanks.
2006-11-28


Phyllis J. Rhodes
I think this would be great without the f*King. Try another word. That word is just so overused. I like your poems though.
2006-11-18