One of my not so good pieces, but please comment.


Without words

When I saw you
It melted

When I felt you
I longed after it

When I heard
Your voice,
Then it was like I fell

Far

Far

Far

Down in the deep dark place
so far away from the surreal world I'm living in
Now


So glad to miss it,
Just all without words




Poetry by Jeanette
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Written on 2005-10-12 at 17:41

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Zoya Zaidi
very imaginative, true to life and expressive piece of poetry
2005-10-12