IF WE COULD...

If we could change the currents inside
appearance would be lovelier
without saying or trying to be different:

one doesn't need props to be ones real self
whatever the lexicon of style
or surrealistic choices we play




Poetry by R.K.Singh
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Written on 2005-10-13 at 05:58

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Zoya Zaidi
The fist line:'IF YOU COULD CHANGE THE CURRENTS INSIDE...' is very beautifuly put- I think is the essance of the poem. YOU REALLY SPECIALISE IN BREVITY!!! It would take me probably a whole page to say the same thing.
2005-10-13


penfold18
A thoughtful piece indeed.
2005-10-13


joel
An expression of hope, of dreams and great passion.
2005-10-13