thank you for sharing my thoughts


Toxicity

The toxicity of all minds surround
me as i walk through the hall of suffering
my life is consumed by an all-eating sound
end it now, and end it quick!

But still i fight back
my fears
the temptation
my understanding of death
and freedom.

Now watch my world dissolve
my wrath resolve
and my pains end
in a circle of death



Poetry by Poe_t
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Written on 2005-10-13 at 15:43

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Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi poe_t,
Just read Toxicity and its a very moving poem about suicide. I feel you are far too aware of the pros and cons to be swept under. I hope I'm right!
Re : your grammar.. you use the English language beautifully to express yourself. It should be "Toxicity surrounds me as toxicity is single. And sircle is spelt circle. I wish I could speak a foreign language well enough to write poetry in it as you do! Well done,
Luv esti
2005-11-05


penfold18
as always it is in mans nature to fight back physically or emotionally a very descriptive piece .
2005-10-13