Hanging Over My Head

They put a rope around his neck
(I'd caught him looking at my sister)

He was longer dying than I'd thought it would take
(I thought he'd been looking at my sister)

He jerked as urine dripped from his feet
(She wasn't my sister)

He danced to a horrifying beat
(I don't have a sister).

A smell of toilets filled my nose
And the brown fell out of his pants:
He had an erection and jerked as his body danced
In its last attempt at passing on life in front of those
Who were taking it away.

They called me a hero,
And bought
Me drinks all night
Because I had caught
Him looking at my sister.

A sister they all knew I didn't have.




Poetry by Mark J. Wood
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Written on 2006-12-06 at 12:59

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Zoya Zaidi
Whew! This sends shivers down my spine!
I don't know why, but I am reminded of Iraq War and the Zagraib prison tortures...
A really chilling poem!
Very powerfull!
Beautifully expressed and concieved!

Welcome to the bay from my side!
(( Hugs)))
love, Zoya
2006-12-06


Zainab
Speaking the truth
I beg you to forgive me
But I'm sorry to say
I didn't understand what where you trying to say in this poem

If you don't mind
Can you tell me
what this poem is all about
May be becoz my english is a bit weak thats the reason I couldn't get the poem
2006-12-06