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My hidden secret

the disease I have is one with no cure
where everyday of my life becomes a blur
There is so much pain and so much sorrow
I always find myself wishing for a better tomorrow
deep inside my heart locked up in a cell
is my deepest secret that I could never tell
If only I could trust, and let somebody know
Then maybe all this pain, I could let go
But I can't see this happening anytime near
because getting close to people is my greatest fear
They tell you they are there for you and that they care
but the second you truly need them they aren't there
so when things get to crazy
and my mind gets all hazy
I take it out on myself
Its my own form of self help
That is covered up beneath my clothes
My hidden secret that nobody knows



Poetry by untamedx3melody
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Written on 2006-12-09 at 06:27

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seda
very well written, rhythmic verses amazed me

regards,
Seda
2006-12-09


Zoya Zaidi
I can see your hidden scars beneath your sleeves,
Don't hide them, show them to the world in form of words,
Pour your secret out in your poems and then you won't have this pain,
Pour your heart out onto this blank paper, and then see the black ink dance,
And produce incredible images, of anguish, hurt and deep love enhance,
That, I can assure you acts as a therapy,
Please read my poem ' My Secret' and see
Cause I do the same,
EXACTLY!

(((Hugs)))
Welcome to the Bay again dear Untamed Melody!
Love, Zoya
2006-12-09


Coolaaron88
I think that is you have a secret, you can let it out if you want. : )

~Aaron Rowe
2006-12-09