About the flame in us...

A Flame

A river flows close to us,
and the fire blazes in us.

Our foreheads are hot,
and the faces burn like fire.

We vanish in flame
and have birth again.

In flame, we become formed,
strengthened, and pured.

In flame, we were created.

Poetry by Dejan
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Written on 2006-12-09 at 20:51

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strong text! a good flow of flaming words!
the flames within are indeed able to light up again and make us feel reborn.. well done!

Fire burning brightly and we are that fire. Good Job

~Aaron Rowe

You are very talented. I love this poem, it reminds me of a phoenix.