tin can farts (double haiku)

the goat chewed metal
cans, like all goats do at times.
then the goat farted.


the smell cut, knife-like
and tinnish notes filled the air
with their silver fumes.





Poetry by intothehaze
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Written on 2005-10-16 at 16:10

Tags Metal  Air  Fumes 

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Teala
hehe cute and funny!
2005-10-18


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
i can smell it from here, damn that goat.
2005-10-16