Life is a game...

I'm sick of this game,

don't wanna play no more.

Why play a lost game?

Oh, I can see it now,

the red and yellow letters twinkling:


Poetry by Cola666
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Written on 2006-12-12 at 21:29

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i believe you meant, fight a lost "cause"...and, in the end of your poem, you used the word "twinkleing"...its actually spelt, "twinkling". i think for such a simple piece (by simple, i mean short) the title is a bit complicated. life, im afraid, is more complicated than simple, im sure we can agree on that. and, as such, figured the piece might be a bit more, well, deep. please take this in the best sort of sense. everything written contains some sort of hidden meaning, at least, poetry surely does...