Being sad...


Winter


It is cold, and the hills are blue.
Your smile fades away
in the picture I looked at
so happily. My words fly
into emptiness, as well as
the tear, for which I do not know
whether it exists
while turning frozen.
And the air is cutting me, but
I do not feel the pain, for
I do not exist.




Poetry by Dejan
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Written on 2006-12-18 at 12:14

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sabereh lotfian
Hi Dejan,
the way you expressed sorrows was great :)*your smile fades away....*
we have a persian proverb which says:
the one who cries has one pain, but the one who laughs has 1001 pain!
this poem made me remember the proverb above:)

with respect
Sabereh Lotfian
2006-12-27


betsy
dejan - this the second poem of yours that I have read. The first "Sincerety; was so clear, this one, I'm afraid will have to be read more than once by this reader...

I didn't catch its meaning.

betsy
2006-12-19