Take vestige from this night of sighs

From in this world, so many lies

Not one that which this heart belays

The soul of one that cannot stay

Not i a life of growing old

The touch of flesh, now turning cold

Take solace in a peace to find

My threads of life can now unwind.

Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2005-10-19 at 16:53

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Zoya Zaidi
'My thread of life can now unwind' so poetic! lyrical! The whole poem kind of flows...

chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
not a bad piece, but it could do with a bit of life throwing into it! the flow is flawed.

you make passing away seem so gentle and non threatning it makes one think of nicer things not of the pain or anything this poem was great