THREADS.

Take vestige from this night of sighs

From in this world, so many lies

Not one that which this heart belays

The soul of one that cannot stay


Not i a life of growing old

The touch of flesh, now turning cold

Take solace in a peace to find

My threads of life can now unwind.




Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2005-10-19 at 16:53

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Zoya Zaidi
'My thread of life can now unwind' so poetic! lyrical! The whole poem kind of flows...
Great!!!
2005-10-20


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
not a bad piece, but it could do with a bit of life throwing into it! the flow is flawed.
2005-10-20


AmonTheDark
you make passing away seem so gentle and non threatning it makes one think of nicer things not of the pain or anything this poem was great
2005-10-19