The hairs raise at the back of your neck as the beat tells us to rave.


Raver.

Scratches on target, bodies readying for the start...
Pointing in direction,
The fingers that stretch,
In beat with the rave; cradles of candlelight.
Toes which hammer,
Rhythm to rhyme,
For the DJ: Equipment in partner, spark bright.
Diving cranium jumps,
To the melody of others,
Overdrive propels bass and treble; violating.
Closing the senses,
The sight in glory and sweat,
Flashes die down of thrashes, annihilating.
Swaying with push,
Fenced: Hitting either side,
Sharper Synth of darkness obscured, dropped.
Bubbles echoed with slang,
Gripped lips,
A whisper towered over the focused; cropped.




Poetry by John Ashleigh
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Written on 2005-10-22 at 09:33

Tags Hardcore  Deep  Warm 

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penfold18
This paints strong images well done.
2005-10-22