Hiding The Ugliness

I see you talking to them.
Low shirts,
To hide their demon wings.
And tight jeans,
To hide their hooves and talons.
I can't do anything but shake my head,
And know that they will never be good enough for you.
I see you talking to them,
And pray you know better.
I see you talking to them,
And want it to stop.
I know it'll lead to your heart break,
And me not being able to stop it.
I see their transparent hooves and demon wings.
You seem to look right past them.
I pray that one day,
You will come to realize what they really are.






Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2007-01-20 at 21:40

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Amanda K
that's very good.



keep it up,
2007-05-27


Phyllis J. Rhodes
And your wisdom grows with each write. You are being filled with it, and it flows from you.
2007-01-21


Kathy Lockhart
You have great wisdom and insight and foresight. And, you have this amazing talent that allows you to right it all out in poetry.
2007-01-21


Rob Graber
Fine metaphors for ugliness on the inside. Good job!
2007-01-20


Zoya Zaidi
I find it full of concern and compassion for a friend, you feel is going astray...
'I see their transparent hooves and demon wings.'
I like he originality of these lines!

Welcome to the Bay from my side!
(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2007-01-20