it was my first poem. and i wrote it in her memories. Read the poem and you 'll come to know who is her.


The Supreme Power Of Love



I love everyone.

So i get love from everyone

From everywhere

But here is someone

to whom

i love most.

But she love with me??????????............

Huhhhhhhhhhh..........

I hope....

She also.........

But i am confused

Disappointed

And

In a great distress

When i talk with her

when i see

Her beautiful face

Just like Flowers

Her eyes

just like stars

I always want to talk with her

But when she come

I hesitate

Oh God..........

Where are you?

Please send someone who'll

HELP ME.







Poetry by Vishal
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Written on 2007-01-28 at 13:40

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seda
Very Well written!

welcome to poetbay!
2007-01-28



Welcome indeed, your poem on love is just my cup of tea....love is the key, just keep writing and I would suggest the pool here to iron out any grammer problems with English as a second language, it is very good here, all very friendly poets of all age and ilks. I look forward to reading more of your work, Smiling at you, Tai
2007-01-28


Zainab
First of all

Welcome to Poetbay!

And believe me

Not only you have such balance
To open your mouth
There are many

But you to be strong

Coz I love you should come first from the boy's mouth other than girl's
Coz most of the time
A girl is more shy!
2007-01-28



dear Vishal, my only advice to you, is that you always follow your heart :). if you were able to write such words about the one you love, i am sure in the end your heart will show you the way to her soul
Lilly xxx
2007-01-28


amandeep
*Bookmark*
2007-01-28


Priya
Great writing,
i love "love " very much.very good poem.
I hope you'll get her..........
Welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-01-28


amandeep
Welcome!
What a poem!
What a great a love!.......what a pain!
Great!

Your friend
Aman
2007-01-28