I am a loner, and making friends is hard.
it seems that meeting people is the most difficult thing I can do.
just laugh, because it may seem really, really silly.


The freedom... my big conclusion.

The freedom of thoughts
make my lonelyness
more understandable?

Imprizoned in a selvfmade shell
protected from horrors
backfiering me
as I get left outside.

Why am I so thoughtless?
I am so full of thoughts,
but that does not make sense.

What is there to tell?
Much.



Poetry by Poe_t
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Written on 2005-10-30 at 20:23

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Zoya Zaidi
Only you can free yourself from you self- made shackles! THOUGHTS ARE ALWAYS FREE!
2005-10-31


cory Crook
this poem is a thinker u have to use thought and understand how it would be to think and blank when its most important. To be secluded sucks. but u are freir that way.
2005-10-30


John Ashleigh
Maybe a more easier structure, and not to be picky, but there were a few typo's:

The freedom of thoughts make my lonelyness more understandable?
Imprisoned in a self-made shell
protected from horrors;
backfiring me as I get left outside.

Why am I so thoughtless?
I am so full of thoughts,
but that does not make sense!
What is there to tell?
Much.

A good poem, no doubt. Keep the writing up!
2005-10-30