The box

Don't breath,
it's too noisy .

Don't say anything,
you've said too much.
And I regret that,
I'd listen to you.

I want you to,
take back your words.
They are to the right in,
the hall in a little box.

Poetry by Calle
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Written on 2005-10-31 at 21:02

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John Ashleigh
This poem is fantastic, hook, line and sinker!

Finally, someone else who uses periods in their poems!!

The first two lines really hook the reader, and the poem itself is perfect in its simplicity.