Zoya Zaidi
Sorry Carmen darling, to hog your page, the repetition was not intrentional... lol!
Z
2007-03-06

Zoya Zaidi
Yes,
Time is a question of our perception,
It is like the theory of relativity
Einstein once explained:
If you are waiting for your beloved,
then few minutes of time stretch to forever;
And if you are sitting on hot stove,
the few seconds never seem to end, ever;
But if you are on a rendezvous with your beloved,
Days just melt into hours and hours are gone in seconds,
Time just passes too quickly like a breeze of fresh air-
A fragrant waft of zephyr...
A moment of ecstasy is etched in our psyche forever...
A moment of agony never leaves our side, ever...

Time is a question of our perception
Now here; now gone forever!

(((Hugs for the inspirational and thought provoking piece)))
Please read my poem "TIME", I touch upon this concept there
Love, Zoya
PS Oops, it has become a poem of sorts, I think I should post it on my page...
2007-03-06

Zoya Zaidi
Yes,
Time is a question of our perception,
It is like the theory of relativity
Einstein once explained:
If you are waiting for your beloved,
then few minutes of time stretch to forever;
And if you are sitting on hot stove,
the few seconds never seem to end, ever;
But if you are on a rendezvous with your beloved,
Days just melt into hours and hours are gone in seconds,
Time just passes too quickly like a breeze of fresh air-
A fragrant waft of zephyr...
A moment of ecstasy is etched in our psyche forever...
A moment of agony never leaves our side, ever...

Time is a question of our perception
Now here; now gone forever!

(((Hugs for the inspirational and thought provoking piece)))
Please read my poem "TIME", I touch upon this concept there
Love, Zoya
PS Oops, it has become a poem of sorts, I think I should post it on my page...
2007-03-06

Zoya Zaidi
Yes,
Time is a question of our perception,
It is like the theory of relativity
Einstein once explained:
If you are waiting for your beloved,
then few minutes of time stretch to forever;
And if you are sitting on hot stove,
the few seconds never seem to end, ever;
But if you are on a rendezvous with your beloved,
Days just melt into hours and hours are gone in seconds,
Time just passes too quickly like a breeze of fresh air-
A fragrant waft of zephyr...
A moment of ecstasy is etched in our psyche forever...
A moment of agony never leaves our side, ever...

Time is a question of our perception
Now here; now gone forever!

(((Hugs for the inspirational and thought provoking piece)))
Please read my poem "TIME", I touch upon this concept there
Love, Zoya
PS Oops, it has become a poem of sorts, I think I should post it on my page...
2007-03-06

kyew
thought-provoking and deeply philosophical. introspective too? self-examination is a skill every mind should possess.
2007-03-05

Kathy Lockhart
Again Carmen, you set my mind to wander around the wonder of your poetry. The question is a brain stirrer for sure. I have read this 3 times and have comtemplated the question over and over often reaching different conclusions. Well written and beautifully constructed.
2007-03-04

There is no doubt what so ever in my mind NSW, that love runs it's own course and as you so beautifully express in this charming little poem of loves journey, loves path is often a difficult and life changing one. We learn something every day with luck. Smiling at you, ~Tai
2007-03-04

lastromantichero
It is a beautiful poem as the previous commentator observes it is in a mood i have not seen your work in for a while and it welcomes the mind .a philisopphical look at the ways of love and of life and destiny well done rgds mike
2007-03-04

Individuality
that left it's marks. . . - its rather than it's as you are not saying it is.
heals it's wounds - the same would apply here.
we give a name to time but with or without us it will still exist and pass. a good poem.
2007-03-04