don't mind the structure. I think it's more effectful this way, it may be more effectful as a song lyrick
I blew myself up
calling your name
you made me burn,
while I sat waiting.
In my silent...
silence,
more noise,
I said
burn
in my rightseous fire
burn
in the room.
Rightseous pain
see me as a stain
a bloody mark
in a silent tomb.
I set myself on fire,
burn.
See yourselves, the unfair, burn, scream
my legion of sorrowless slaves, servants of my grief
burn in my rightseous suicide
see your love song in hell...
next floor. Heaven!
Nothing there, close the door,
please,
close the door, my words are disoriented, see yourselves, as you climb
to the next,
the next...
level?
Poetry by Poe_t
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Written on 2005-11-06 at 19:11
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See the sky in flames
A song,I blew myself up
calling your name
you made me burn,
while I sat waiting.
In my silent...
silence,
more noise,
I said
burn
in my rightseous fire
burn
in the room.
Rightseous pain
see me as a stain
a bloody mark
in a silent tomb.
I set myself on fire,
burn.
See yourselves, the unfair, burn, scream
my legion of sorrowless slaves, servants of my grief
burn in my rightseous suicide
see your love song in hell...
next floor. Heaven!
Nothing there, close the door,
please,
close the door, my words are disoriented, see yourselves, as you climb
to the next,
the next...
level?
Poetry by Poe_t
Read 764 times
Written on 2005-11-06 at 19:11
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