first attempt to a haiku.. ;)


transmigration


you can walk away

transmigration is a fact

souls mate forever




Haiku by tonsoku
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Written on 2005-11-15 at 17:25

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Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Great first attempt at a haiku!

Did you mean "soul mates "
or" soul's mate " ?
I think the first one is better but of course its up to you, I just used to teach English and I love correcting stuff..
Loadsaluv esti
2005-11-27