whisperinvoiz
i see u climbing dante's ladder.
take a note of the last line, "in the corner ... my eye" , a typo i guess it is. nice piece.
2007-05-12

whisperinvoiz
hey! u are a writer with a difference. i like ur style. tapping the gifts of silence...hummmmm. i like u
2007-05-12

V.V.Ramesh
good one my dear frnd:)
2007-04-25

F.i.in.e Moods
:) if i were the demon, i'd shiver and pack my bags if i were to be left standing alone just with you lol ;) i'm teasing you, but really the strength and power of expression here comes through clear and convincingly... the words i take them as advice we give ourselves at times to overcome what holds back... it's a fight, but it's one well-worth going all the way for... excellent write for personal victory, night :) *hugs* xx
2007-04-23

Rob Graber
Nice write, you sly psychologist you... :-,?
2007-04-23

Saga
And from the bloodhsed of the eternal aggression shall come a reckoning. Great one!!!
2007-04-21

kid
This is great!
2007-04-20

Kathy Lockhart
brilliant work Carmen. I see first the intimidation or fear of the demons. Then the bold admission of their presence. Then the wisdom to release them into the hands of the other. After that comes inner power over them and then their fading away to nothingness. This is ART! bookmarked for its Powerful Message.
2007-04-20

Colin Skilton
And when we se the demons who betray us in the reality of light, they are small insignificant little creatures that are laughable and easily removed. But first we must discover them and destroy them one by one and release our soul into the light Of God and our Saviour, dwell in his light and feel the joy of love and beauty that should be yours andc let its beauty surround you always.
I am glad you have destroyed your demons my friend and thankyou for
this wonderful piece of excellent writing.
Colinxx
2007-04-20

Will
Masterfully Expressed!!!

Enjoyed the metaphoric message here...


Very Well Written

BOOKMARKED!!!!
2007-04-19