You Deserve to Kill me

Rosy your eyes
Is very special
Glittering like pearl
Rosy your eyes
Glancing...
Your sexy eyes,
I read the words
Love bubbles to shower,
Innocent, pure and tender
I spied inside, ember
Sexy, fire like eyes
Ignite...
my heart to burn,
I too, prepare to die.
Lock me in your eyes
Let me feel...
Warmth of your lips
Let me absorb
Pain of love
Let me chill
In your beauty.
Oh! Lass of fantasies
How fortunate I am?
Alas! Your pretty eyes
Kill me
Thousand times,
In my poetry
I love you,
And kiss you,
Blends with romantic poem
Words to words
Lips to lips
Lines to lines
Eyes to eyes
Breathe to breathe
Sensual to sensual
Layer to layer
Tears to tears
I feel and care
And curve abyss admire
I hold your tears
Your pain, I chop
Forget me not
If Killing
Is love
You love me
Because
You deserve
To kill me.







Poetry by Tsewang Dorjee9
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Written on 2007-04-24 at 09:31

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A very sweet write on just what loving someone does to our hearts. I felt a little hitch on the grammar at the beginning of the poem, but the journey became smoothers as it progressed. Maybe a tiny edit could perfect this little love poem? a very good effort, all the same, smiling at you Tai

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2007-04-24