This poem I wrote for my ex-girlfriend. We had to break up due to certain reasons, although i loved her. I wrote this sometime after this incident.


Sweet Past of Mine

Sweet past of mine,
Forgive me love,
For all thy pain,
For I knew not about the future,
And nor did I plan this fate,
Consider my plea,
Consider my forgiveness,
For I am ever guiltful,
Of thy sadness,
And of thy sorrow,
Do not grief,
Do not regret,
For my love for thee,
Was not a fake,
But was true,
But had to end,
Since reasons beyond,
Control and reach,
Surely I pray,
That love for thee,
Will find a brighter path,
That kindles thy happiness,
And brings thee,
Much joy than I have,
For thou art worthy,
Of much greater love,
Than I have shown.




Poetry by Angelo
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Written on 2005-06-24 at 08:30

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
again... lots of emotions in this one as well... the impression I get is that you feel you have failed someone you love very much and that she deserves better than what you could offer... kind of sad expression... I don't know when this happened but I hope you're feeling alright... at the part where you say "Do not grief", I think you mean "Do not grieve"... nice poem... thanks for sharing :)

later...xx
2005-06-24


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
again a good piece here but i am not too keen persoanlly on the use of thee on thy etc in modern poetry as we do not really use those words in everyday speech in this time. other than that and as i say that's just my personal thoughts, it is a good poem showing the feelings of sorrow entwined with love's face.
2005-06-24