I can sense..


I can sense
your aroma
sailing into
my aura


I can feel
longing for you
I can feel
the love
At one time
I Thought
was true




Poetry by ~Charonessa~
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Written on 2007-05-23 at 16:37

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Zoya Zaidi
I love the first stanza,
second too- it is a such a unique poem!

Welcome to the Bay!
((Hugs))
Love, Zoya
2007-05-23


Amanda K
that was so sweet.thx 4 sharing it
2007-05-23


Hagzissa
Yes, the longing can be felt through the text. Beautiful!!!!
2007-05-23