raiment

as the
ferry
sways
on the
autumn
swell
we walk
the deck
in silent
awe
beneath
the silver
raiment
a clear
and
milky
way
set
light
by Perseids
of
cold
and
streaking
fire

there is
a chill
within
the air
the dank
dark
chill
of dawning
but as
the sky
turns
black
to
blue
I see
your
eyes
catch
light anew
as
Perseids
lit
the raiment



Poetry by Peter Humphreys The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-07-03 at 02:04

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Zoya Zaidi
As I read your poems dear,
A calm descends on my soul,
Yet, I am oddly disturbed,
As the meanings start to descend
Slowly into my soul
Slowly, imperceptibly...

Beauty, thy name is Peter!

((hugs my dear finest of fine poets...)))
Love, Zoya
2007-07-04


Rob Graber
This is beautiful for both imagery and rhythm.
2007-07-03


penfold18
Its great to feel yourself getting caught up in the flow of this yet it is unhurried and hangs you on each word a delight to read and enjoy Peter.
2007-07-03



i love the way you make me pay attention to each word, and the way each word becomes alive in your writings...there is a certain fluidity in your poems that keeps me going all the way to the end of them...beautiful!
Lilly xxx
2007-07-03


BlueyedSoul
Your poetry is so incredibly beautiful and moving to read Peter. I envy your talent. Warmest wishes my friend.
~blue
2007-07-03