Irresistible

When my eyes are cast upon you

I see the tenderness inside

You're always there just when I need you

And I hold you with great pride

You are the sustenance I crave

As you softly touch my lips

I love you in your naked form

And all those rounded bits

You know I can't resist you

Its no good asking why

For I shall just consume you

My favourite pork pie.



Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2007-07-04 at 17:23

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normalil
Graham, the ending was a complete surprise, I nearly fell off my chair with laughter! So clever. I wonder how "Jeherico's" pie turned out! (Can't remember his real name.)
2007-07-10


Peter Humphreys
This brought back so many great memories of Liverpool and great Lancashire pies I have eaten, I forgot I am a veggie now!
2007-07-08


Rob Graber
This makes me hungry for pork pie, and I don't even know what it is!
2007-07-06


emily chambers
Nice unexpected poem, though could've been a sweet pie, dont they awake ur perversion?
cheers ;)
2007-07-05


Kathy Lockhart
A love poem for a pie. Oh my, Supper Sensuality! : )
2007-07-05


M Heathcote
Just a wonderful poem Graham
I hope My favourite pork pie
isn't an endearment though, lol
2007-07-04


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
What good'n , serducktive , as looking forward or back to a happy memory , a great punch line. Just love such poems , those with an unexpected punch line.

Ken ( D Williams)
2007-07-04


Zoya Zaidi
I love the last anti-climactic punch line! Much in your naughty style!
(((Hugs for bringing a smile on my face Graham Darling)))
Love, Zoya
2007-07-04


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey Graham this is a lovley pie oh sorry
but i remember Harris's and Marsh and Baxters pies amd indeed Palethorpes non the less
a lovley poem Graham well done
2007-07-04