Loving friend


When you touch me
heaven opens up
it feels like magic.

When you hold me close
you treat with great respect.

Like a loving friend
you give me energy and joy



Words by Adeleine
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Written on 2007-07-14 at 20:32

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amandeep
so beautiful.I loved it so much. you have tremendous art of writing. when i read your poetry then i forget all other things. it is just like an ocean. and a great flow. so smooth and silky.

Welcome to Poetbay.

sorry i wished it to u late but i was not here.

with best wishes
Amandeep
2007-07-15


Hagzissa
And that's the way it should be!
Great writing
and welcome to the Bay.
/Jeanette
2007-07-14