The rose in the garden

In a world
Full of negative thoughts
Violence and war

U'll find a rose
Beautyfull
Though fragile

Take care of that rose
Let it blossom
Don't try to pick it
And put it in a vase

It needs the open skies
needs it freedom
Admire it and let it grow
And furtulize it
With U'r pressence
And companionship

But remember
Don't suffucate it



Poetry by Dalmore
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Written on 2007-08-21 at 10:11

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Amanda K
I do agree with in order to things and humans to grow more beautiful, we should water them with love and give them freedom.


thx and regards
2007-08-23


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
a lovely poem well writan , full of pathos. ww1 the popy was seen a booty of much significants . '' a flower is a flower by what it's very exsitance a flowering bouty
Thank u my freind , Ken
2007-08-21