first off I miss a large 'I' in the third last row =P and 'tide' has to be one of the most beautiful words in english =)

Otherwise it's a very beautiful poem which really describes how I feel right now. I really like the imagery gray-rainbow...

but the last two lines is a little hard to understand. you get the point but if you read them carefully you only get confused, which I find a little irritating.

Keep up the good work!
2005-12-06

vicky vixen
Having read "Insight to my Life" earlier and having myself recently lost a wonderfully precocious young son to his long and hardly fought disease, I can only say whatever good comes our way today, go with it. Your poetry reawakens memory of the good things in life which sometimes, enveloped in our own grief, we forget.
2005-12-04

Black Knight
I do not think that someone, except of you, can answer...
2005-12-03

Zoya Zaidi
Aw Graham,That is so beautifuly warm and refreshing:
"But how long will they stay"-
They will stay!
"So why inside emotions hide
And now fills me with fear."-
Because it is love!
The trepedition of love!
Hey,Pen, Why was it that I always thought you were eighteen???
I think it was the 18 in the penfold18...
2005-12-02

Albert
Another lovely read that gives warmth on these cold wet days and lifts one towards the bright colours leaving all the greys well behind.
Regards
Albert
2005-12-02

pettyodd
i'm just going to repeat what mike said...
great job!
2005-12-02

lastromantichero
hey Graham this is so good well done on you range regards mike
2005-12-02