Silent as the grave.

A snowflake falls.
One of many.
Turning the ground white and soft.
Silent as the grave.

A tear falls.
One of many.
Turning a face wet.
Silent as the grave.

Copyright 2007 Nyorioko.




Poetry by Nyorioko
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Written on 2007-08-28 at 14:34

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Inspired
nice:)
2007-10-08


Michael Dyst
hmm..
I like the simplicity here, it's not rich in metaphores or a twisted play on words, but it doesn't need to be...
the repetition actually works here, which is rare...
2007-08-28