visual touch

grey wood is still warm
the boathouse wall feels my hands
darkening fjord light



Haiku by Loke
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Written on 2005-12-04 at 08:41

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BlueyedSoul
Dear Loke, i must tell you i never read haiku usually...not really my favorite.....you seem to have changed my mind.

I love the sensuality of the words you use...they are so very resplendent.

~BlueyedSoul
2005-12-06



i can see it with my inner eye and feel it in my hand...
Great haiku with a very appropriate title
2005-12-06


Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Loke,
Keep writing haikus, this one is beautiful and on an original topic which I always love to find
luv esti
2005-12-04


pettyodd
very visual...
lovely!
2005-12-04