StillHoppin
Cutting-edge, creative idea which made me smile ear to ear. LOVE -t!
2013-06-07

Lea Foverskov
i LOVED this!!! amazing stuff! truly fantastic rob! i was struggling to get through it, to understand the i's that were gone, and suddenly my face lit up in a smile as i realized your mission. great work!!!

-Lea
2007-10-26

Lavender
I see, Sir, that you have been enchanted, for you are missing your i's. Take this small flower and rub it across your face and the i's will reappear if you say the proper enchantment. Do you know the words?

A small faery,

Lavender
2007-10-26

April S
br-ll-ant! - love -t!
2007-10-25

Thomas Selnes
Now, you wont hear me saying this all that often, but I found this one to be really sweet. And funny. And clever too :D
2007-10-24

Rob Graber
u can -mag-ne how - agon-zed (agon-sed -n UK?) about that l-ne 10... f-nally dc-ded 2 celebrate -ts "metanarrat-v-ty" as -t were... thanx 4 a most amus-ing comment
2007-10-24

Mark J. Wood
Shouldn't it be "she knocked my -s out"? No "i" and no apostrophe?

Also, those -s representing "I" (the person rather than the capital letter of a more-than-one-letter word) ought to be capitalised (American: "capitalized"). The lack of capitalisation caused severe confusion in my reading of this poem.

Rob, I enjoyed this one - sharp, playful and clever. I wish -'d thought of it - sorry, I forgot the capital.

Mark.
2007-10-24