You didn't really

You didn't really
Want me to do it

You didn't really
Want me to say it

But I did it
And I said it

That is what
Separates us

To this day








Poetry by EMITSTI
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Written on 2007-11-10 at 03:27

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Rob Graber
I really like the tight, spare structure--the way it focuses the reader's mind on the one word or phrase that is changing. Bravo!
2007-11-13


Edgar John Jackson
Some people believe love is a one way ticket but those who really say and do what love makes them do and say, they really love. we don't have to feel we are belittling us when we really love. Great poem, I loved to read it. thanks 4 sharing it ;)
2007-11-10


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
A powerful poem but did they want you to say

'I love you '

I just bet they did a good poem and so well crafted
rgds Mike
2007-11-10