If it was only true...


In a moment of enlightement

the world stood still

everyone holds there breath

the birds stopped they song

the bark of the dogs was not to hear

the music didn't leave a sound

even the whisper of the tree

seem to be dissapaired.

All senses was going up to heaven,

up there, in a moment of joy

in a deep blue

conjured by a wonderfull warm

the heaven speaks;

stay one with everything

in love and peace.

In a slit, everything was different,

the people senses them self - and others

in dignity and respect.

Desctrucion and weapon dissapaired like dew.


In the time of surrendering exhale

the hard ordnance falled from the shouldres.

Solidarity,

the wind spoke,

solidarity





Poetry by Adeleine
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Written on 2007-12-04 at 10:32

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful poem Adeline...

I particularly was impressed by the line,
"In the time of surrendering exhale"....great line!!!

Stan
2007-12-05


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Simply beautiful. I believe it is true because one person (you) managed to see it, even if others don't see it. That means that in your heart that world exists, that realm is true. Don't give up on the world:)
2007-12-04