Serenity

foot on forest floor
a subdued light calms your face
time on rusty axe



Haiku by Loke
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Written on 2005-12-20 at 20:49

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Sylvian
This was pretty good, actually.
Even though haiku seldom works in other languages than Japanese, this do.
Good going.
2006-01-12


Loke
Thank you, Ange1a, Aliena, KJC! Do not clean the rusty axe! Its rust of old age allowed the trees to grow high and their foliage to subdue the light.
2005-12-22



Serenity is what i feel in reading this text, the elegance of which, coming from you, does not surprise me
2005-12-21