I have not seen him for five years

And I miss him

We spent six years together
And we loved each other

I had no choice
I had to end it

He understood
He accepted

Deep love embedded in the sea
Deep love embedded for ever


Poetry by EMITSTI
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Written on 2008-01-17 at 05:04

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Rob Graber
Very interesting, austere text here on a complex theme: It's not that they did not love each other... Somehow, love is not always enough; it fails to "conquer all."

PS: Line 3 needs a space between "each" and "other."

Kathy Lockhart
this is poignant and so beautifully written. It wraps itself around my emotions and swallows me into the well of it's sadness.