The Smile.

Sweet is the smile that creeps
Within the shadows of the heart
To claw away the darkness
A new life to impart

A guiding light for lovers dreams
A beacon for the blind
Nectar for the growing bud
That nestles in the mind

The key that now unlocks the cage
From a prison without bars
Releasing passions envoy
To trip among the stars

The candles flame is but a breath
That flickers in the night
As fragile as its beautiful
The smile becomes the light.




Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2008-03-02 at 11:52

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Aisha Razem
The candles flame is but a breath
That flickers in the night
As fragile as its beautiful
The smile becomes the light.

Beautiful , I wrote apoem about my morning candle, and I felt you wrote the one much tenderer and softer than mine !
I liked this
thanks for sharing the other's feelings
all the way of shining
Aisha
2008-03-04


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
oh lovely! beautifully, sweetly, romantically fine.
2008-03-04


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
'sight'
2008-03-02


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I say, that we should all try and smile - it gives less wrinkles and its a damn site more fun - thank you,

Elle x
2008-03-02