haiku

thick fog –
glowing eyes
of a car




Poetry by Mukul Dahal
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Written on 2008-03-07 at 00:35

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Rob Graber
Oops! Can't count today: make that 2-3-3!
2008-03-07


Rob Graber
Now I notice the syllable count is 2-3-2--not even HALF of the haiku's 5-7-5. This is indeed more from less. I don't know if it should be called haiku or not, but it definitely works here!
2008-03-07



A brilliant demonstration of the principle "Less is More"!
2008-03-07


Rob Graber
A fine haiku: brings the image straight into my mind!
2008-03-07