Aaron Jon Wells
your the man. nice write
Haiku and Senyru are favorite forms of mine...you do it very well!!
I get a very vivid picture from this! ~Laura
a cool modern haiku... could've sworn i'd read it before tho... (the reason i say this is because i liked it so well, it is striking in my memory...) have you posted it on another poetry site? allpoetry, perhaps? (i'm almost positive that's where i saw it)~ i liked it then and i like it now...
smiling - dreams of love, scents slowly passing by of mother earth. a nice piece here.