Shadows flow eastward

I cleanse my golden tooth
in the lovepallid water of the evening

On our balcony
which circles days and nights
in the outstretched hands of the house of years

You've got cool depths
in your shredded robe's tears

In my tooth glints the low light
of the setting sun



Poetry by Loke
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Written on 2006-01-01 at 11:04

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Zoya Zaidi
Wow! what a tooth Loke!

(((hugs)))

xxx, Zoya
2006-01-29


Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Amazing Loke. I was so impressed and moved by the idea of "lovepallid water", your gold tooth glinting in the low light...
Excellent stuff!
Happy New Year! luv esti
2006-01-01