sleep

I am in a dream-like state
in which I am consciously aware of my surroundings
but oblivious to what I am doing
Words are flowing through the stream in my mind
Darkness prevails and starts to solute in my atmosphere
It is not day nor night, but somewhere in between
I long for the great and admirable long sleep
How delightful and comfortable it will make my eyes feel
The euphonious organ playing to complement my dreams
The pleasure of the inability to feel remorse, regret, or melancholy
The sweetness of the romantic feel of comfort




Poetry by LaLa
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Written on 2008-04-27 at 04:46

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Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Bookmarked! xxx
2008-08-04


Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow! What a hypnotic poem.
2008-04-27


Elle
Sometimes the blessed relief of just forgetting, even if only for a short time - that releasing of all the tensions, is so needed and long for. I do like this, having had times in my life where, all I wanted was just to sleep for a while and be at peace - until I found out that peace can be found in waking hours too

Elle x
2008-04-27


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Ah sleep oh for the sleep of the innocent man amongst us a powerful statemnent on the essential 33.333 % of our lives a wonderfully ryhthmic text and a timely reminder.

well done regards Mike
2008-04-27