O' heart don't be restless

Oh heart, don't be restless
don't be maddened, for an alien soul
Unaware of you,who provides just sores
Don't run on the imbalance waves, for the habitat of fire
It actually is burning you being far away.
Daily, daily when you talk through air
what infact gain do you, than untraceable pain.
O come on, come on!
Remember the lull days,
You spent in your own, happy go lucky ways.
Tell apart the reall you
An ever green blosoom, that never fades.
The malevolent downpour, tried indeed
But recollect, you never slipped from your rigid creed.
Now when you claim that a fatal malady hem in
I go with you dear, if true, will must win.






Poetry by Amna Ehsan
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Written on 2008-05-29 at 14:39

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This made me cry with joy and sadness too because I just lost the comment! Glitches are chasing Tai. This poem is one of the most beautiful pieces of poetic advice, given with such love and devotion and that is why it brought tears....Every word will be carried in my poetic heart forever....these lines I found most profound....

It actually is burning you being far away.
Daily, daily when you talk through air

thank you for sharing your wonderful work with us in this bay of tranquil poets. Must have been blinded by your arrival, because I can't believe I could have missed such treasure as I have found within your texts.

Smiling at you

Tai
2008-09-04



Such good advice and with a most caring and sharing appeal written in the deepest romantic reading of the poets heart! Wow! I can't believe I have missed such a lot of your work? I must have been blinded since your arrival in this wonderful bay of tranquil poets. Thanks for sharing your art with us....A favorite for Tai, which she will keep forever in her poetic minds eye.
2008-09-04


Damon
Very Good! I enjoyed this one as well.
Damon
2008-08-26


Damon
Very Good! I enjoyed this one as well!
Damon
2008-08-26


Damon
Very Good! I enjoyed this one as well!
Damon
2008-08-26


Damon
Very Good! I enjoyed this one as well.
Damon
2008-08-26


Damon
Very good! I enjoyed this one as well.
Damon
2008-08-26