a salty whisker won't hurt anything..


mourning

it was cancerous-
neither time nor indifference
could muster a defense
too quickly, heart betrayed brain.

mother mourned
a bright eyed boy
whose mouth had caved
and whose tongue was severed.

knuckles rheumatoid-
fists clenched,
protesting loss in off places.
ten crags in search of the sea.

in deference to this, to his-
to him--
heart eats night colored wallscapes
of its own lone shadow.




Poetry by halfjack
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Written on 2008-09-20 at 05:36

Tags Love  Loss  Pain 

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Stunning work! So spooky, also to find it here tonight! Amazing imagery. You may be a halfjack, but you are no halfpoet.

Mourning is a tragedy in its own right.

Tai, smiling at you, determined to find the light

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2009-09-18


Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow!

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2008-09-20