this came to me after a long walk..it's about whatever the reader gets from it


last night and then this morning

the last leaves of autumn fell,
finding a grave in the imprint
of stranger's feet-
shallow as it was, they seemed content

the leaves look more like wings,
imaginary things
that carry with them, the first cold breath of winter

wind wrestled with the margins of a book
left outside the local coffee shop-
someone had forgotten it, maybe
they had no more use for it

to think about the nights
spent in the anguish of absence
when a book is the only sanctuary
in loneliness

this is the way
to make amends with shadows,
to offer a truce to the past

on some nights
the book we read
is the one we're writing
and memory and wind
aren't always so comforting




Poetry by Amberlee Carter
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Written on 2005-07-09 at 06:37

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LurieJune
Exquisit!!!! I realy enjoy the format and choice of wording here. Especially this part.....
"on some nights
the book we read
is the one we're writing
and memory and wind
aren't always so comforting" Lovely!!!!
2005-07-09


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
it's about whatever the reader gets from it
- true of every poem written.

reflection on life, a good thing to do, walking, letting the air get to your head is nice.

strong voice here, imagery packed.
2005-07-09