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Windy songs and crispy leafs




. . . and as I observed the beauty of the sun
in your eyes I reckoned with the fact that
you see the moon in mine.






Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2008-11-26 at 12:53

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Charlie fan
wow, stunning. i like the ideas it brings up, the sun and moon always chasing each other, diametric. umm, a small suggestion, i think if you changed the last 'my eyes' to just 'mine', it gives it a crisper ending. =) great poem.
2008-12-02


Nathalia
Beautiful in its simplicity!
2008-11-30