co - write with A_R_Glasgow. Thank you A_R_Glasgow:) It was fun to write this one with you


Sharpen Your Pencil




Superficiality’s superiority
Soothing suffering and
Abhorrent inferiority

These are a few of my favourite things

Plaguing prejudices
Stereotypical standpoints and
Disgusting self awareness

These are a few of my character traits

Phantom Souls Domain
Position Sensitive Detector
Practical Self Defense

These are what I try to understand

Sardonic smiles
Slanderous remarks
Silly fing projections - rejections

These are what I think I see

Escapology.
The opium of the masses
Escapology.
The cure for my tortured soul
Escapology.
Future's hope and enemy

What is there to define?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2008-12-30 at 13:34

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Makes me think how human and less superior we are. Its good to get to the point being so pointed at humanity, we are so aware of our weakness that is why we write and yes we sharpen our pencils to possibly improve our writing and see ourselves on paper. The one thing about human nature is they know their weaknesses and people remind them continually, that is why there is little encouragement even to sharpen ones pencil, they drive their pencil in to make their point. That's humanity for you! We think we a good when we are sharp, we think we a great when we are blunt, do we ever learn?
2008-12-30


V.V.Ramesh
Good one ya well written :)
2008-12-30



lol A wonderful collaboration of you two fine poets, summing up all the foibles of humanity. Made me think and smile all at the same time, and how lucky we are to be able to escape!

A fine collaboration.

Smiling at you both

Tai
2008-12-30