just expressing myself


the long game

we are all the same
and this is but a game
and through all the pain
there are things that keep me sane
in all the wind and rain
everythings the same
were all playing this long game



Poetry by Pokershark
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Written on 2009-01-14 at 02:15

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danielle289
I really like your work, well done, beautifully written!


DSPG
2009-01-15



Excellent compression in expression and I agree with you that we play the game all our lives and at all stages we bow and take the applause or the pain, whatever stage of the game we are playing, the key is, to play the game and be true to yourself, after all, we are all responsible for our own destiny and destiny goes through infinity and beyond our mere mortal comprehension, so who are we to change the age old rules? I am enjoying work, keep writing....

Should be in bed, smiling

At you instead

Tai
2009-01-14


gemma
i really like this
im not sure why, so this is a fairly pointless comment,
but i really like it :)
x
2009-01-14