another little Haiku suite, 5-7-5
just trying it out,



HAIKU II


Free spring and autumn

yet summer is expensive

we pay with winter



Coolish winds and rain

Special Seasonal Offers

poor advertisement



With floating sunshine

snow is crying on the ground

a thaw has set in




Haiku by Northlight
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Written on 2009-01-16 at 16:36

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Well done, I was drawn to "poor advertisement", that line got me, anyway thanks for posting these. Great to read.
2009-01-16


Nyorioko
"snow is crying on the ground"

Such a beatyful line
Great work
2009-01-16