Don't Call

Persistence, will not
make me answer
the phone quicker,
you need a slicker patter
to make me chitter chatter.




Poetry by Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-04-30 at 11:59

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Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
I'll try to keep this sweet bit of well written advice in mind. :)
2009-05-08



Oh, you're hard on us guys. Your words back memories of sitting by the phone as a kid, trying to get the courage to call a girl. What nerve it took to dial those numbers (back when there were dials!). It wasn't a question of persistence, but taking that first tentative step.

Your five lines made me smile. And wince.
2009-05-01


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Elle...delightful !!!

And the way things are going now in our chit chat culture,
to your "chitter chatter" you can add "twitter"

xxx Stan
2009-04-30


normalil
O how I wish I'd written this little gem!
2009-04-30


Purple Phoenix
I wish I had this poem on hand a few days ago... I can so relate to it. Thanks for this ;-)
2009-04-30