Not a Haiku

Written amongst me
So extraordinarily
Words are my desert.



Poetry by jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-06-02 at 00:44

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More please! David Copperfield has nothing on you girlie!lol

Loved your Not a Haiku...indeed? syllable perfect.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-06-03


NicholasG
What comes out is quite esxtraordinary too. :-)
Nick
2009-06-02


melanie sue
ooooh , yeah, and I love LOVE your picture.....brings back old memories when I was walking in a place like that for real....so
SOOOOTHING.
2009-06-02


melanie sue
These are words so cool, so wrought with meaning and done so well with such simplicity.....my favorite type of poem. I loved this, for it is just cloaked with powerful meaning. :)
2009-06-02


Rob Graber
Nice one--what an unexpected metaphor!
2009-06-02