a piece of pie

In love for miles,
I still search
for your tree smiles,
along boulevards
in the crowded streets,
in the avenues
architecturally designed
for shade.
I could never be
your suburban girl
never follow your ideaology,
not sure I care about
cartology;
I memorise
routes instead







Poetry by Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-06-20 at 16:28

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Spirit Bear
I belive you are looking for new
place to be.
you've been looking all over, but never really
found it yet
i belive that soon you will find it have faith
and pleasent journies
2009-07-04


kath
loved the analogi in your words.. and it tells me of the typical situation people getting close and in love fall into .. the different aspects of them seem to emerge and some parts seem set on leting love felt go to waist.. don't know if I make any sense here :) but this is what cametomy mind reading your poem

kath x
2009-06-21



i took a snap of your city and i knew you were in the pic
2009-06-20